Rough Cut Feedback??

Please post what your feedback is on our production here please:


Group 54:

Editing is good although not very creative, think the credits need to be up for longer to read, the soundtrack is good but it gets repetitive it needs something with a faster beat or a shock point , it doesn't make you jump. We didn't understand why the boy was running it was a little vague just running and then someone just grabs him from behind.


Group s2-49:

We think that it is generally effective, with good shots, but we believe that you should include more shot variety. We also agree with the other group and think that the music is well done, but rather boring, and needs some more variety also, you could include some sound effects, for example. It does however build atmosphere well.

Group S2-50:
The sequence needs to be longer, it finishes early on 1:30 roughly, and should be 2 minutes. Throughout, the soundtrack is repetitive and we think you need to consider the juxtaposition of your shots. Your sequence needs to be more continous and the plot needs to be clearer.
You titles were really good though they fitted in with the sequence.

Group S2-51:
The soundtrack although does create a tense atmosphere, does get a bit repetitive. Although it is clearly obvious he is running from something, it is not obvious why. the shots could do with being a bit darker, so it adds a more intense atmosphere.

S2 52 feedback:
Personally the soundtrack should be more up beat instead of a sort of drowsy feeling this took away the suspense of it being a thriller. Also you don't really get much information of the story from what is seen and lastly it needs different shot types for it to be more varied.